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11.14.5 'The Tea of Sound'

'The Tea of Sound'When I try to see the world, in forms,  its mathematics is found to be intense.In order of operations, we have: warms… discarding season, “lublic”, leaning, dense.The tea of sound...

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Interested too in getting a second (third, fourth) opinion on what this should be called.( I mean, it's english-to-english, right? -well, it is among us, in workshop setting.) But in the publishing...

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I thought it looked familiar.    LOL!

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 I hope you aren't displeased.

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I can always tell your poems by the titles. Love the rhymes, rhythms and repetitions in this one! Some truly great lines and images -- perhaps "The Tea of Sound" as title, though I don't know the...

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do you mean feel the title is too dense?

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more than needed to draw me into the poem

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i often do that, I think. In the poem too. I take the long view.but it's often very dense.

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Alison, now I had time to compare it line by line with the original - it's brilliant!Just heard the sad news that Umbrella has published its last issue and Tilt-a-Whirl will soon follow suit.  Two...

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What a tour de force. Can't believe how fast composed that. It seems like such a lot of work and thought. Pretty amazed am I. Love: while I, though Ariadne-like, utmost amazed by every crumb and...

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Oh, I'm very glad you approve, Esther! Yours is a wonderful poem to work with. I love that fuck S, but tried my best not to ride on its coattails, for example. The thing is, I think a reader would...

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Doubt if anyone would take "Arrgh poetica," which has been published both online and in my book.  Not sure I like "Red" enough to submit it anywhere.Another idea:  If you like, I'd be glad to post...

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I thought I had posted comment here! I am losing it I think. This is an amazing poem, Alison, and I too am shocked at how quickly you compose these. I did not look up all the sources on this so I...

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yes, thank you! I'll look it all over. The TwoWords link looks fruitful.

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You can still send this to Tilt-A-Whirl. I think she is still reading for it.

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Cyn, thanks. It is really line by line with Esther's Arggh, Poetica...just the one poem. and I saved a few actual partial lines of hers. If you read her poem"Red"I put the link to, you'll get the...

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yes, I agree, the lost/found/erased/translation poems are a sticky situation. Not sure how to look at them with an eye to publication. Regardless, you did a wonderful job with this.

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We could start our own journal.   I have an Ogden-Nash-style interlinear based on Ashbery that nobody will touch.  We could call it Plagiaries. 

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something to think about! .....ooh, whine. (keyboard just typed shine- sense of humour beast. just lost a whole document of carefully written acknowledgements, (for my chap) with some kind of disc...

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the penultimate S makes me all buzzy.

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Re: 11.14.5 'The Tea of Sound'

buzzy-- I had to look back. maybe it's the bergamot!!!! love it.

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